PKMichelle

Thanks for the review and all of the feedback! As for the switching from first-person to third-person, I totally see what you're saying. The only reason I did it was ...

Yeah, that makes sense. That's kind of what I figured after thinking about it more. But don't apologize for it being convoluted. Convoluted is fun, and it can make what ...

Thank you for the review and the kind words! I loved hearing your interpretation of what I wrote, and I'm glad you thought it was good. Once again, thank you! ...

Thank you for the kind words! Some of what you said was spot on, but I didn't actually have much in mind when writing this, so hearing your interpretations was ...

Thank you so much for the review and the small criticisms along the way! I will definitely take each and every one into consideration when working on my next project! ...

I have no idea what happened in there, but it's supposed to say "a legitimate thing: a leaf of basil".

Also, something I forgot to add: I really love the title! It's fantastic in the way "Just a Leaf of Basil" is a legitimate thing%u2014a leaf of basil, but in ...

Thank you for the review and all of the kind words that came with it! I will absolutely take your advice and work to improve my character development, as well ...

Hi again! That's a wonderful offer, and I'm very honored you extended it to me; however, I'm kind of busy with school and everything else I have to do at ...

Thank you very much! It is a play, and I'll definitely think about adding that in there. Thanks for the review and the kind words!

Thank you for that feedback! Repetition is definitely something I struggle with and will be working on in the future. But I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway!