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Re: Diary of an Atheist
Actually Sureal, I disagree. Christopher Fry once said, " Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement.", and here, you have the writer exploring his own amazement. ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: Our Kiss
Hello, My name is Jacintha and I've decided to critique your work tonight. [/quote]As my face blush, My blood rush It doesn't really make sense. Maybe if you change it ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: The Future
I really liked reading this poem. I thought it started out with a great question that had me thinking from beginning to end. When I read the last part, " ...
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: Existence
Alright, first of all let me just say that this thought blurb of yours kept my attention the entire time. If you knew me, you'd know that isn't a easy ...
Apr 2, 2009
