OxfordandOnyx

Hey Katie! Great to see you posting another version of the poem, as it's all about seeing what works and doesn't work. Now, don't let the whole repetition thing get ...

Hi, I'm glad you posted the next chapter of your story up so fast- I really wanted to see what happened next. (: Few nit-picks "Sarah, you're normally fantastic at ...

Haha, that's hilarious! I care too much about Penelope, Henry and Lina (oh, and Di) to care for Will. He was sweet but am I cruel to say I'm not ...

It's great that you are adding in improvements and taking all comments on board! If you are trying to use sentences that conveyed strong messages make sure you read it ...

I liked Twilight but boy did SM reuse the same words a couple a hundred times a page... "Grimace, chisled, marble, amber, liquid, topaz, Blah... Blah.. Blah" But Breaking Dawn ...

I'll leave out Breaking Dawn which was horrible... Jane Eyre- I liked the film adaption so I thought I would give the book ago but seriosuly, I just could not ...

You should really continue reading- I love them and yeah, they are really hard to put down (: It's a shame they're not widely heard of if you know what ...