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Re: Mei, part I
I liked the idea of Mei wanting the animals and having the Ships go to Madagascar, but I wonder if you could put a bit more context into the story. ...
Mar 28, 2016 -
Re: chase
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Mar 18, 2016
I liked the timing of the story, but I wonder if you could have added a bit more content. I did like the amount of context but I wonder if ... -
Re: chase
I liked the timing of the story, but I wonder if you could have added a bit more content. I did like the amount of context but I wonder if ...
Mar 18, 2016 -
Re: 滴答
Great story! Well described and had correct grammar for a present tense story. Hope you can make more stories and share them with the community. I was wondering about the ...
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: The way of Buddha
I liked the amount of description and how the story flowed. Liked some of the description but thought you could have described a bit more about what some of the ...
Mar 9, 2016 -
Re: The Myth- Chapter eight; I'm really not good at focusing!
Really good story! amazing and addictive and everyone could get into this book! I really hope you post again, because the description was amazing and I really wanted more! I ...
Mar 7, 2016