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Hi again! Now in this chapter here, the narrating voice makes much more sense! I get it now. It's very unique, my hat goes off to you. Now, I'm dying ...

Hi AwesomeSauce! I do like mythological/fantasy novels, so yay! This was also quite well-written, I couldn't spot any grammatical mistakes, so double yay! However, there's this exception: names Right

Hi Caylleen! That's a lovely name, I must say. My first impression was a good one! Your grammar is good and the chapter is structured well. There is one bit ...

Hello VampireSenshi! You have an interesting short story here! The concept is good and I couldn't spot any typos, so kudos to you. What you could improve, to make this ...