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Re: Journey To Nevercross Chapter One
Hi again! Now in this chapter here, the narrating voice makes much more sense! I get it now. It's very unique, my hat goes off to you. Now, I'm dying ...
Jan 28, 2013 -
Re: The Journey to Nevercross
Hi AwesomeSauce! I do like mythological/fantasy novels, so yay! This was also quite well-written, I couldn't spot any grammatical mistakes, so double yay! However, there's this exception: names Right
Jan 28, 2013 -
Re: The Beginning of a Journey
Hi Caylleen! That's a lovely name, I must say. My first impression was a good one! Your grammar is good and the chapter is structured well. There is one bit ...
Jan 28, 2013 -
Re: Lawful Evil
Hello VampireSenshi! You have an interesting short story here! The concept is good and I couldn't spot any typos, so kudos to you. What you could improve, to make this ...
Jan 28, 2013