Overwatchful

Yes, the name is in reference to the Stormlight archive! I'm glad to find another fan!

Thanks for the great review! If/when I go back and rewrite this, I will do my best to spread out the information, but most of the remaining story will be ...

Thanks for the great review!

I definitely will!

Hey ChrisDixon! Thanks for the great review! This isn't a happy story. Even if they do survive at the end, it's not without a high price. So I'm going for ...

Thanks for the great review!

Hey ChisDixon! Thanks for the great review! There are two more parts to this story, Part 4 is already up. When I say "man," I mean more along the lines ...

Thank you! I went back and fixed the errors you found

No problem!

No problem! It was weird. I starting writing this review before you tagged me. Then the notification popped up and it took me a minute to figure out what happened

I'm sorry I didn't see this earlier! I would just say patient, I haven't heard any other terms.

Thanks for the great review! This story is supposed to be a more realistic view of war and fighting, so cutting those scenes out defeats the purpose somewhat, in my ...

Thanks for the great review! There are 5 parts to this story, the next one should be out soon.

Thanks for the review! I agree, it is rushed, but I will probably go back and revamp and continue

No problem!