Overwatchful

Thank you for the great review!

Oh my word Hardy I love it! I'm really happy you took this dare lol. It's not a half-bad script to be honest. Just needs... a little revamping. But seriously ...

Thank you! I'm definitely going to use it now

Hey @KateHardy! Long time no see! I'm glad you liked this. Thank you for leaving your review!

Hey @Liminality! Thank you for the great review! Yeah, I kind of moved on from Sena a little to quickly, but she is the main character's wife. Anyway thank you ...

Thank you for the great review!

Holy cow you're quick! I'm am super glad you enjoyed it (well, maybe not but you know what I mean), and thank you for the great review!

Thanks for the great review! Yeah it is supposed to be the same person, but I'm not actually sure what the original name was supposed to be, my autocorrect can ...

Thanks for the great review!

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ohmygosh i love this so much-

I'll keep that in mind, thanks!

Hey, thanks for the great review! Actually, this story only has two parts, I guess I didn't make that clear in my A/N in the last chapter. I was aiming ...

@stygianmoon17

So the formatting is different in this part. The -x- symbol indicates a change in perspective, so hopefully its more clear than the last chapter!

Thanks