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Hello, Stormblessed here! So, I haven't been keeping up with this story, since the sex stuff was a bit too much, but this chapter seems to be taking a different ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! You were a pretty good writer when you were ten! I know that mine would not have been as good as this. Your probably able to pinpoint ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Alright, let's get this on it's way! Once again, your grammar and spelling are great, so nothing to correct there. This is one of my favorite chapters, ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Nice chapter! You are really good at themes like this. The Führerin is definitely intimidating, and I can't wait to see more of her! I really don't ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! I'm here to drop a review for this work. I think you did very well, grammar and spelling wise. Unfortunately, this chapter feels somewhat scatterbrained and rushed, ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! I'm sorry I didn't review this earlier, but there really isn't anything I would change! But I'll do my best to get this on it's way out ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Thanks for the tag! This chapter was worth the wait. I know I've said this before, but I love the way you write Valarian's emotions. It feels ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Wow, what a chapter! I cannot wait for the second part! I think you wrote this very well, and your spelling and grammar is great! This is ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Great second part! There really aren't many errors, but I'll point out the ones I did find. Reaching the top of the incline though, they discovered the ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! I am really liking this story so far. You have great characters, and I can't wait to find out more! Your grammar is pretty good, except for ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Wow, this is moving fast! Take some time, slow it down a bit. Most of this action has only happened in the span of twelve hours or ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Alright, nice chapter! The story is getting going. There are quite a few grammar mistakes, mainly I noticed sentences that were awkwardly written, and a few misspellings. ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Great start! You really drew me in, and I can't wait for more! Your spelling and grammar are great! Not many people here can write as well ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Great prologue! I can't wait for the next part. Rosewood and Waterspout pretty much covered my opinion on storytelling, so I'll just point out the grammatical errors, ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! I really enjoyed this piece! That's some beautiful imagery you got there. There really aren't any grammar or spelling mistakes I could find, except for this: Every ...