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Re: Deleted 61
So I know you don't know this, but I secretly stalk your poetry. This isn't a review, its just me asking, heart on my sleeve, that you always continue to ...
Oct 28, 2015 -
Re: Fire and Earth (title subject to change)
I can see what you mean, it gets a bit blocky doesn't it? I'll work on that tomorrow :) thanks!
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Prologue
I do believe you've spent some time on it, as I stated above the story is unique and interesting, it just needs some refining. Don't delete it, just improve it ...
Oct 24, 2014 -
Re: Prologue
From out of the azure waters came life, from the sky came life, life came burrowing out of the Calico Galaxy. From the night sky in a fury of fire ...
Oct 24, 2014 -
Re: Beautiful Baby
Hey thanks for the review! This work is actually pretty old though, maybe try checking out the current literary forums for something new to review!
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: A Stolen Life: A Memoir
Sorry, the author is a very publicized case. She was kidnaped and held captive for 18 years before being found. Lol I just sort of assumed most people had heard ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: A Stolen Life: A Memoir
This isn't a story I wrote... this is a review of a memoir.
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Where the Wind Blows
Twit I will for sure work on some of the grammar issues, for some reason dialogue grammar always manages to screw me up. Thanks for the nit picks! Tanya You ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Confessions of A COA (edited)
The commas and the fragments were intentional, actually. I did change the one run on sentence mentioned above mostly because I felt it was more powerful when it was split, ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Confessions of A COA (edited)
The.Dreamwalker: I kind of agree about the last line, it was one of those last minute adds that I did while editing, when I had already sort of lost the ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Love or Torture
I leave this as a reminder to myself to review when I get home :)
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: A Scoundrel's Heart: Chapter Two
That wasn't a title at the top, if you look, it's a link to chapter one. I think that reading chapter one will probably clear up some questions for you, ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: One Large Laughable Mistake
Kamas> It's intended to show what it really feels like for the abused years later. Where some details are very vivid, voices, tones, smiles and eyes and faces, but then ...
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: One Large Laughable Mistake
The commas and dashes are probably not necessary, but they're intended to show where I paused in my own mind before continuing. It's supposed to feel a bit jagged and ...
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: Amber-Liquid Death
Amber-liquid death = death by alcohol. The amber-liquid of course being the alcohol.
Feb 10, 2010