Otterpop

Many of the subtle details you were noticing were indeed intended to be subtle, especially as I'd rather not dump exposition everywhere! Can't have writers doing that too often! Even ...

Thanks so much for letting me know about the repetition! It was something I hadn't quite noticed myself but I appreciate you pointing it out. I'll keep all your comments ...

Ahh, gotcha.

NovelStar? I have no idea what or who that is.