Otterpop

Wow what a review! The fact that there seemed to be more analysis as opposed to criticism was really intriguing as I am always looking for ways to improve my ...

Alright then! A lot of good information to keep in mind for myself (regarding reviews, POVs, and character personalities in particular). I'll try and get some more comments or reviews ...

Thanks so much! Whether or not you may leave a review or comment, I do hope you might have time to read the previous 11 chapters as I put just ...

Heya! Thanks so much for the review! I am always happy to have more readers (more feedback/comments allow me to pull from many perspectives and catch little details or point ...

Seriously. I do love reviewers like you that explain exactly how my writing style is succeeding, and other ways it could improve. It's always something I keep in the back ...

Hey there! Thanks so much for the review for this chapter even though you felt you couldn't contribute more for the last one, though knowing you agreed with comments on ...

Thanks so much for the feedback! Every little bit of constructive criticism always helps, beyond just the typos and grammar corrections. Your comment on the time period was indeed a ...

Glad you came back for another chapter read! Stuff like that always brightens up my day! Love the perspectives you gave and are getting to know the characters and perhaps ...

You pointed out a lot that I definitely didn't quite think about! (besides the obvious grammar mistakes of course). I definitely could either expand or remove some of the details, ...

As always I appreciate people nitpicking even the little things! Also happy to see that there didn't really seem to be any major problems with the story or characters (yet, ...

I don't normally tag.......but funny enough you're the second to mention it so I think I may end up doing so when new chapters come up. Anyhow, thanks so much ...

Thanks so much for the review! Appreciate that you mentioned the tagging, though I don't always like tagging people for anything so I might avoid that, if that's alright..... Again, ...

You make a fair point, definitely! Either way, your insight and the insight of any other readers here is most appreciative and helpful, especially if I intend to publish one ...

Once again your feedback is remarkable and appreciative! Sometimes I feel like the further you go in the story, the more constructive criticism I ought to get. Yet, that doesn't ...

Yay, glad to hear you liked this one a whole bunch! No worries about not having anything negative to point out; even the compliments if worded right can be seen ...