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Re: Awakening Book 2 Chapter 5: Crowded
Once again, apologies for the "transition" between last chapter and this one, I think I somehow missed transcribing an entire scene or two in the last one and will try ...
Wed May 27, 2026 2:37 am -
Re: Awakening Book 2 Chapter 4: Fearful
Oh no, sorry to hear that you were ill! I was myself for a couple weeks there, it's no fun, but hope you're doing a lot better now. You bring ...
Wed May 27, 2026 2:34 am -
Re: Awakening Book 2 Chapter 3: Concerned
Thanks Tikaya, that does help lots!
Wed May 27, 2026 2:30 am -
Re: Awakening Book 2 Chapter 5: Crowded
Your compliments are greatly appreciated! The atmosphere you had read into while going through the chapter was pretty close in terms of what I was trying to deliver, so thank ...
Thu May 07, 2026 4:47 am -
Re: Awakening Book 2 Chapter 2: Messy
Sorry for the very, very late response! I'm trying to get back into the writing stuff and looking back on what's been done so far for Awakening Book 2 chapters! ...
Mon May 04, 2026 10:36 pm -
Re: Awakening Book 2 Chapter 2: Messy
Sorry for the late response, I'm getting back into the writing sphere! Thank you for letting me know about the strange wording of some of my sentences; sometimes I write ...
Mon May 04, 2026 10:28 pm -
Re: Awakening Book 2 Chapter 3: Concerned
Admittedly, I was struggling to write this story again but not due to lack of reviews! Just lack of free time given all the other projects I have. But I ...
Mon May 04, 2026 10:24 pm -
Re: Awakening Book 2 Chapter 3: Concerned
I'm glad I was able to convey the emotions as well as you described them. That is definitely a writing hurdle I had to get over during my writing journey ...
Mon May 04, 2026 10:20 pm -
Re: Before the Dragon - 1.1
Fair enough, I suppose I didn't consider the high tolerance perspective of it! If she has a higher tolerance similar to you than it's possible that your descriptions and examples ...
Wed Mar 15, 2023 1:38 pm -
Re: Awakening Book 2 Chapter 1: Shocking
Hey there, yosh! Thanks so much for the review! You definitely make a lot of good points, though a lot of it can be explained by the events of the ...
Mon Feb 27, 2023 4:26 pm -
Re: Awakening: Epilogue
Firstly I wanted to show my appreciation for all your reviews; even if your reviews cropped up in later chapters they were a big help to me with editing and ...
Sun Jul 24, 2022 3:02 pm -
Re: Awakening: Epilogue
First off I want to say thank you so much for all your reviews, Mailice. This was the first story I finished with my most polished writing style, and you ...
Sun Jul 24, 2022 2:57 pm -
Re: Awakening Chapter 25: Recovery
No need to apologize! We all have busy lives I'm sure. You're definitely not the only one looking forward to the conversation with Blake and his mother; I myself have ...
Sun Jul 24, 2022 2:51 pm -
Re: Awakening Chapter 25: Recovery
Thanks for the review Mailice, really appreciate it! Apologies for any confusion at the beginning but I hope it was easy to follow afterward in terms of where the story/characters ...
Sun Jul 24, 2022 2:48 pm -
Re: Awakening Chapter 24: Puzzle
Heya Mailice! I definitely may have moved a bit hastily towards the end there, you might be right on that! But there was a lot to cover and I didn't ...
Sun Jul 24, 2022 2:40 pm
