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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 14

    Hello! This is Orabella, here with a short review. At first, I thought Lucy was just Molly pretending to be a cat. But no, I guess cats are just from ...

    Aug 30, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 13

    Hello! Orabella, here to review. You know, I usually don't like reading dreams in stories. I find them cliche and repetitive. It's typically some warning to the character or hidden ...

    Aug 29, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 12

    Hiya! This is Orabella, here with a short review. I'm sure Keith'll be fine. Probably. And it's not like he's alone! He's got a silly little shapeshifting creature that adores ...

    Aug 27, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Passion Forest; Chapter 2 - Past the Waterfall

    Hiya! This is Orabella, here with a review. Ahhhhh! Where are they? What's happening? Is this normal? A completely white room... I wonder how big it is. Are they in ...

    Aug 26, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 11

    Hiya! This is Orabella here with a review. I'm screaming in my mind right now. So, this is a little different from the first chapter. The first chapter introduced Keith ...

    Aug 25, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 10

    Hiya! This is Orabella here with a review. I think this is the shortest chapter yet. Not that I'm complaining. I like it when chapters vary in lengths. So the ...

    Aug 24, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 9

    Hiya! This is Orabella here with a review. I'm just laughing at the fact that the chapter is called Cheap Sunglasses, and then you start it off with, "People screamed ...

    Aug 23, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 8

    Hi! This is Orabella, here with a review. Ahh! What did he see? I've gotta say: you're great at hooking readers to keep reading on at the end of chapters. ...

    Aug 22, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 7

    Hello! This is Orabella, here with a short review. Looks like nothing too bad came out of Molly's departure, and she was quickly found. But now I'm left wondering what ...

    Aug 21, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 6

    Hiya! This is Orabella here with a short review. I don't know if I'm happy or sad that I guessed what was happening next. This... is going to lead to ...

    Aug 21, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 5

    Hi! This is Orabella, here with a review. Aww, poor Molly! All she wanted was a friend. And though Keith was a little harsh, he's had a lot to deal ...

    Aug 19, 2023
  • Poetry » Chickens, General Re: The Haiku's Predicament

    Hiya! This is Orabella here to leave you a short review! This is by far the shortest work I've ever read. Which is to be expected because, well, it's a ...

    Aug 19, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 4

    Hello! This is Orabella, here with a review. Almost all pet owners have tried their pet's food at least one. (Says the girl who's never had a pet) Although, my ...

    Aug 17, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 3

    Hiya! This is Orabella, here with another short review. I love your drawings! They're so cute and well done! Now I understand the clown in the cover. And oh! Molly ...

    Aug 16, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 2

    Hiya! This is Orabella, here with an (unfortunately) short review. My skin was tingling right along with Keith, although with fear rather than strange green goo. This is getting to ...

    Aug 16, 2023


I always prefer to believe the best of everybody; it saves so much trouble.
— Rudyard Kipling