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Hi ! What's up ? I like the story so far. But, don't you think it's going too fast? I think that you should give the reader some time between ...

Hello !What's up? This is a very interesting story .I really like it a lot . The end was well done . Your style is smooth and it attracts the ...

Hi !What's up ? So the idea is no bad itself but there are some mistakes : depended on // since he gave me // at 3:30 ... There is ...

Hi ! This is good .I like the fast pace . I also like your description which is realistic and as I said in the prologue : convincing . There ...

Forget the Hi ! Wow ! This is story is breathtaking . The description is so convincing . There is so much suspense .I'm going to read the other chapters ...

Hi ! I like the chapter . It's easy to understand yet beautifully written . The pace is fast which is needed for a supernatural story . The description isnicely ...

Hi ! I like the idea of this story . The first part of this prologue was slow and didn't contain much details but the second part was good ;plenty ...