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Thanks fo the review! Just to let you know that I am a knight, so you get a badge! To let you on a little insight, I was saying that ...

This is all of Chapter 1. There are no paragraphs and a lot of ??? I am trying to fix this, but it might be hard for you to read ...

Thank you for pointing that out. Frankly, I was surprised I didn't misspell more. I was typing in the dark :D

Just a helpful hint: In order to get points you need to review someone's work. BTW: This is nice. Like it.

Thanks for the review! If you want, I can PM you the rest of the 1st chapter, because I don't want to post all of the first chapter with the ...

Ah the use of paragraphs. Here's the thing, it isn't allowing me to use paragraphs, which is making me mad :D I'll have to figure out how.

Hahaha, I achieved something in my career! You now mourn their deaths! Just kidding. Thanks for the review, I only put this up here because it is a older story, ...

Thanks for the review! It is reviews like this that I love, although I could do with some critizing. There aer more chapters out, so be sure to read them ...

Thanks for the review! As for the typos, I am going to fix that as soon as possible, but I type so fast that I don't always see all of ...

Thanks for the review! I hope that the typos didn't dissuade you from the actual storyline. I actually don't proofread, I admit, because I post it right after I make ...

Thanks, I hope you like it! Trying to put some suspense in this!

Thanks for that! I write so fast, trying to put my ideas on paper before the dissapear that I don't see some of the spelling errors that I do. I'll ...

Thanks for the review, really brightened my day. I agree with everything you said and just ask one thing, I have more chapters with this, so when you can, try ...

Thanks for the review, this isn't all of Chapter 6, and I haven't had any time at all to continue it, but I will now. :P

Thanks for the review, alas I agree with you that I should have made it longer, but this was originally for a school project, and I didn't have eough time ...