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Hey there Phoenix! Back for Chapter 1!! This might be a shorter review, fair warning. Blades of moonlight sliced across the dark streets, illuminating the buildings in an eerie white ...

Hey there Yoshi!! Vincian here to review. I must admit, I'm a little apprehensive about reviewing this, since it's out of my comfort zone. But! let's give it a shot ...

Hiii Wolfe! Back for the second part! This might be a short review. The target bolted off his pedestal and shoved past a few normals in his way. Ahh, yes, ...

Hey there, Mea! Looking forward to reading and reviewing this. Last chapter was pretty good! Fyn’s paws carried him to a stop just as an orange light filtered around Kez’s ...

Hey there sound! I never did finish reading or reviewing this, for which I apologize! At this point, I'm not sure if you're even looking for more feedback on this ...

Hi there FlamingPhoenix! Thank you so much for your interest in wanting me as a potential reader and reviewer for your novel! I wanna give this a preliminary review just ...

Hey there, Shady! I've got a lot to catch up on (like 50+ chapter parts XD) so I'm thinking I might review this twice a week to see if I'll ...

Hey there Shady! I would say SURPRISE but I think we talked about me picking this story back up ^^ I might have troubles remembering some of the stuff that ...

Hi there illy! Here to review this piece today. I only ever realised that my nan had written my name the wrong way round when I looked up from my ...

Hiya Wolfe! Surpise!! I am on a mission to support my friends' works by reading and reviewing them. I have heard good things about this, from you writing it and ...

Hi there Mea! Surprise! I wanted to celebrated my friends' pieces by reading and reviewing them. So, here I am ^^ So, my reviewing style: I usually focus on the ...

Hi there, GoodieGoat! Welcome to YWS! I hope you are finding your way around the site well enough. If you need any assistance, feel free to PM me or any ...

Hello, ShadowVyper! Since this was posted in 2012, not long after you joined, I want to wish you a (very) belated welcome to YWS! If you need any pointers for ...

Hi there! Thank you so much for tagging me for Chapter Two ^^ Let's get into this! It's nice that Ahsoka went to the funeral for Padme. Is she hiding ...

Hello there Scribe! I love Star Wars and I also think there's so much potential in changing the story. I am excited to see where this is gonna go, and ...