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Hi there! Here to review this fine evening. Things I liked; Fab opening. I love a short line to start and yours has drawn me in perfectly. It’s not overloaded ...

Hi! I really love it then someone writes from their own personal experiences. It immediately makes it more relatable & you can really see the real life moral dilemma and ...

Hi there! I’m a tad rusty at this, so bear with me. Things I liked; I enjoyed your sentence openers. There was a lot of variation. I liked your hints ...

Hi BlueAfrica - here as promised!

Back for week 2 :) Im a little surprised that Einar is more manly than I thought he was in chapter 1! Is it me or does he come across ...

Hi Regismare! Here as promised

Back for week 2

Here as promised

Hey WillowCutz! Nice to meet you :) Let’s get into the chapter! Things I liked; Amazing description in your first few paragraphs. I love that you’re filling everyone of my ...

Hi Dreamworx! Here as promised :) Let’s dive into chapter 3 shall we? Things I liked; I think you’ve improved tenfold with your description compared to your previous two chapters. ...

Hi EverWinter! :D I don’t think we’ve ever spoken before. No better way to break the ice than giving a good old review :) Things I liked; Even though I ...

Hi again Dreamworx - on to chapter 2! Things I liked; 1. Your first main paragraph is jammed packed full of fantastic description! I love that I can really visualise ...

Hi there Dreamworx - Olive here to review your chapter! Things I liked; 1. I like your opening chapter. It’s short, concise but full of good description. It gives just ...

Hello TheFantasy14! Nice to meet you and welcome to the family! Good to see that you’re already diving into YWS life. Let’s get on with the review, shall we? Things ...

Hi Meandbooks! After a long time watching you week after week submitting your LMS chapters - I thought I would come and check them out for myself! Here goes! Things ...