OldManJenkins

Okay so for a rough draft, this is pretty good. Some thing that I enjoyed is that while you're continuing the main story, you kept the theme of referring back ...

Wow. This is honestly a poem unlike anything I've seen before. Typically when one thinks of a poem, that person thinks of some cliche sob fest of a bunch of ...

Poetry is a powerful, thoughtful, and effective way for one to express someone's emotions with paper and pen (or in this case keyboard and computer I guess). This poem encapsulates ...

Overall, this is an awesome story with a premise that holds a promising amount of potential for an amazing narrative. The colorful vocabulary that you use and the advanced words ...