OfferingUpMyOwnConfusion

Everyone's pretty much said it for me, but i loved this poem! it was so honest and real. Short and sweet is sometimes just the way to go:)

You words flow really well and for a beginner at poetry you have a way with rhyming! The concept of the story is very "Romeo and Juliet," i love it:) ...

Simply amazing. That's just about all I can say! It's just flawless =]

This poem is absolutely beautiful. I loved your choice of words and the way you made them flow together with ease. I don't really have any critiques, plus I just ...