Oddie

Swell.

Thanks for the critiques, everyone. Like I said, I saw the open box, and i just started writing, no hesitation whatsoever. This was the first draft, and I'm am notorious ...

Fair. That's almost R content though. Unless you're savvy with an R story, you might want to shy out of the major thematic elements and accompanying cuss words. Good writing, ...

This is a pretty good story. Nice and interesting. You might want to bump up the rating just a smidge if there are any more potty words.