OceanofStars

Well, I like this. This writing in this chapter flows well and the dialogue is very good. Also it's not very often that I read about a character who's a ...

I guess I'll go by your mistakes one by one... Don't be rude to monstergirl. She's giving you criticism, and if you can't handle it, then don't bother posting your ...

This has a great idea with the half-angels and the cat shapeshifters, yet you lack a few things to make it much better. You need to vary the number of ...