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Re: The hole ( a short story )
This story is amazing I can picture the story like a little movie in my head There are only a few changes I suggest making. -Deleting words line 2 *im ...
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Re: still in the confines of eachother
I love this story, very creative I think you should begin by capitalizing all the I's and the first letter of every sentence. And commas in the following places, First ...
Sep 10, 2024