Oakenshield

Okay first of all nice image of the poem. I think this poem goes about how far someone can go and you put it great in a beautiful piece of ...

thanks Audy, this helps me a lot, I'm just a beginner in poetry so I like your review, thanks for that, Dazzle

thank you so much for this lovely review, you made my day

Hey Deadman, thanks for your review, it means a lot and I change the faults in my poem, thanks for your advice

So beautiful, I love this

I can relate to this one, a very good poem

I can relate to this one, a very good poem

I love dark poems, this one is really awesome

Oh really cool, this was amazing