Nyx

Hey there, First let me say welcome, and I hope you enjoy your time here at YWS :) Sorry for the short review but here goes. I like the story ...

Hey there, So I'm not really into this genre normally (so I can't really give a great review), but the title caught my attention, and now i'm really glad I ...

Hey there, Sorry for the short review However there is not a lot I can add to this, other than I really like the way this is heading and the ...

Hey there, Sorry for the short review, but I don't have a lot of time at the moment :) First off, I really like this. It is really deep and ...

Hey there, I like your plot line; I just finished a book about kidnapping and that's why I really want to see where this story goes! :) Your introduction would ...

Hey there, Sorry this is a flying review I like your story, it has some good emotions in it. Throughout the piece there are a few missed out spaces where ...

Hey there, A lot has already been said, however I would say just watch how you are typing e.g. i should be I; and I don't know if I am ...

Hey there, I love this, it's really great and i love the truth about the headache (about not waking to someone asking if your alright :) ) Just one thing, ...

Hey there, Don't have much time, but let me say wow! :) I love this, it's creative and makes you want to read more. I love Mr. Floss. (The way ...

Hey there, I love this story! It's so sad at the ending, but the emotion is great. I did get a bit confused with the jumping of the story, but ...

Hey there, Not a lot i can say, but I really do like the idea of what you have done. It's creative, funny,and i like the title. (However I did ...

Hey there, This is an interesting piece. The emotion is shown well, and the use of the short sentences to get that across was good. I did pick up on ...

Hey there, It's not a great review but all i can say is it was a great read! The idea was a brilliant one and i laughed through it. Really ...

Hey there, Okay i don't normally go for the diary entry type stories; just for the simple fact that i like having that development throughout a story. I did however ...

Hey, I can't say i liked the story, and i can't say i dislike it either. I felt that the story held a good flow to it and it wasn't ...