Nymeria

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Hi, thanks for the review! This was actually for a class and we were limited to one page, so I hade to keep everything super condensed. You're right that things ...

Thank you for the review! If anything, I want to portray the god of war as more sad and broken down from all the crap he has gone through and ...

First: Thank you!! The hand cutting thing always annoys me too!! But also I wanted the imagery of blood running down her arm. I was wondering if someone would ask ...

I think you're right that I need to develop the character just a little more. Thank you!

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Thank you! So the dark one kind of represents all of the girl's 'negative' emotions. Sadness, fear, etc. They help her to realize that even though she isn't good now, ...

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Now that's a story that draws you in! I have to say I don't usually read novels with a very strong romance spotlight, but this pretty catchy. Both chapters left ...

Thanks for the review, Vivian! 1. yep, it should be 'on the fifth day without her father' 2. I will definitely fix that sentence. As for the part with the ...

Thanks for the review! When I started this story I really wanted it to be an actual SHORT story, but I kept thinking of little things I wanted to add ...

Thanks so much for the review! I will definitely have to try the sandwich thing. I never really know the best way to format a piece of poetry, so those ...

Thank you!