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Thank you thank you thank youthankyoutha- you get the point. Unfortunately I was trying to finish this story in an extremely limited timespan. So while I%u2019m not able to revive ...

It's nowhere near perfect, but it's slightly better.

Thank you for the review, but I wanted to let you know that I've already edited the issues you addressed once (or at least in part) in 'Gems of Genocide ...

Thank you so much! This is very helpful and I'll get editing right away!

Thank you so much for your review, it helped a ton! I'll be sure to take into account everything you said and thank you for keeping the review positive!

Thank you so much for your thorough review! It helps a lot and I'll definitely work on everything. As for the paragraphs, I wrote it on Google Docs before I ...

Thank you so much for the comment! That's exactly what I needed to hear!

I plan to be a regular reader and reviewer of your stories seeing as I love your work! I'm sorry I haven't gotten around to the second part of the ...

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I'm appologizing in advance because some of this will seem nitpicky or may just be my own preference. I'm also still figuring out how to work this thing, so wish ...

Thank you and sorry! I am glad you told me this. I honestly hadn't tried to make a duplicate comment but yeah... Thanks!

I took out sentence number one. If possible, could you please read over it and see if I should change anything? I'm afraid I may confuse people if they go ...

Thank you so much for your wonderful review! I'm so happy your mom is okay as well! For the first sentence you quoted (Which after this I'll just number) 1.) ...

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Visualization was great, but you need to remember capatilization. It's beautifully executed, flows well, and is generally good poetry. I have a vague idea of what it is about, but ...

Woah... Just, woah.Not a bad woah, good woah. Woah. In all honesty it reminded me of Supernatural. While I don't agree with everything you wrote, it is a good story ...

I like what you're doing. The sentences do flow together nicely, but I honestly don't know how I feel about the white wolf repetition. I see what you're trying to ...