North

Good poem! I liked the metaphors ;) I think the last two lines of the second stanza sound a bit awkward when read or spoken, which is too bad because ...

Wow, this is great! As good as, if not better, then your last work. You're improving! Anyways, to the review. The first paragraph confuses me a little. Was the narrator ...

Wow, great ending! I got pretty into the story, it was exciting. I didn't notice any grammatical errors. I think you did a good job giving just the information the ...

Oh no! Worst thing that can happen to the writer! This was a pretty interesting story! I was engrossed the whole time and wanted to see what happened. :'( It's ...

I'm guessing you submitted this from a strange format, but there's a ton of question marks that are kind of annoying. Maybe it's my computer's problem. Ignoring them, this is ...

Hi! I think this is really good! You're really captured the moment. Some of the words or phrases you used seemed a bit overdone, but that's just me and I ...