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Haha! Don't worry! I won't die!

Thank you!!!!

I am so happy! .-.(that's supposed to be an upside smiley face!) My writing is UNBELIVABLY STIFF but I'm practicing to get rid of that. But I guess that's how ...

Thank you, Zo! I'll work on it and come back with an even more interesting and grammatically correct chapter 2!

Thank you! Thank you for the helpful writing tips but, he doesn't know his name yet, possibly woke up from a hundred years of sleep, and has no memory. He ...

Thank you for your weird, confusing but helpful criticism, Skye... I will try to work on it. Remember when I showed it to you before? You read it...and handed it ...

Thank you, Tanya! To tell you the truth, I knew how crappy this piece was even before I posted it. P.S The guy is supposed to be super calm and ...

Eyes! His eyes were closed! It was my fault for not checking over. I usually stumble and write words twice or don't write them at all. And I didn't realize ...

Thank you, Audy! I actually knew from the beginning about my constant descriptions. You see, my English teacher likes a whole ton of descriptions so in order to suck up ...

I thought this short story was really well done, and truthfully, by the halfway point, I wanted to read more. But I thought the ending was sort of abrupt ( ...

Thank you! That means so much! I know this was sort of short but my reasoning is that it's a prologue. They have to be short or else, they'll let ...