Noelle

Hi there! “Found what?” Novara asked impatiently. “The twin,” Nidara answered, turning around to reveal the book in her hand. Weren't these exact words in the last chapter as well? ...

Hi there! I'm all caught up now! Weeeeeeeeee! ...right, no more sugary cereals for me. Aw, Jackson is so sweet. Here he is, offering to take Violet somewhere where she ...

Hi there! I'm back again :) I looked at the Social Outcast table You don't need to capitalize 'social outcast' here. It's not technically a proper noun. Yes it's a ...

Hi there! Okay, so I'm going to jump right into it here. I've noticed as I've been reading this novel, that your paragraphs are awful short. Now, that's not necessarily ...

Hi there! She pleaded for help, but I couldn't do anything. The next day, after her operation, she broke free. Here's the second time I've seen this so I'll point ...

Hi there! Oh, I really like the scenes here with Izak. It's nice to get a look back at Raelyn's life before she found the Truants. That's one thing that ...

Hi there! The hall was quiet , and Rofulo didn't follow him. Of course Rofulo didn't follow him. Why would the king follow out a citizen? It just seems a ...

Hi there! I'm here to review! (finally...) Its windows were grabbing at the sky and pasting it on the glass. Hm...I think this might be a little too much description. ...

Hi there! I am finally back for another review! This is going to be a pretty short review since there's not really much that I have to say. So in ...

Hi there! ...a whistle? She had a whistle?! Thanks for making me worry for nothing :P Noooo! She missed her father's funeral?! D: That's terrible! Why didn't anyone think to ...

Hi here! Congrats on getting to 15,000!! :D *throws confetti* One of many word count milestones :) One thing I've noticed as of late is that you have a good ...

Hi there! Wha--is that really Noelle leaving a review on one of my chapters?! Yes, yes, I'm really here, finally. Sorry, I've been super busy as of late and have ...

Hi there! First off, this is one big paragraph. And honestly, I found it a bit hard to follow. You should most definitely break it up into different paragraphs. That ...

Hi there! Just a small nitpick here: Sylvaris surveys the exterior of her old home. 'Surveys' should be 'surveyed'. You're writing in past tense. Sometimes it's hard to catch these ...

Hi there! Hehe. Just from the title and the description alone, I know this is going to be good :) I really need to crow up since I found all ...