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Re: Who I Am Is Who You Are
This is a really good story. I like how you begun it as if it was a teen novel, as someone mentioned before me, but then it all changed. There ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: Flyer's Flight: The Story Of The Opal (Chapter 1)
To be honest, I was kind of disappointed by this chapter. I understand that you are trying to add background information to the story, but after the tragedy filled prolouge, ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: Flyer's Flight: The Story Of The Opal (Prologue)
I really like the beginning to this story. By starting with a tragedy, you pull the reader in and make them want to read more. You also didn't give a ...
Oct 1, 2010