Noelle

Hi there! This is a great story! You put a ton of imagery and emotion into this and kept me reading through the end. The characters were portrayed perfectly, not ...

Hi there! I was impressed by the way you wrote this considering teenagers driving drunk is such a touchy subject. However, I do agree with roostangarar about this. You need ...

Hi there! This poem is written very well. I found it very easy to read and it had a definite rhythm to it. Your imagery is great and you really ...

Hi there! This is a great poem, I enjoyed reading it! It told a good story and really had a good balance between show and tell. Your imagery is quite ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this poem, it's great! Your lines really flowed well together and worked to keep the poem moving. You also have great imagery and paint ...

Hi there! This is a good poem and tells a good story. You have great description in this and great imagery. I really got a good picture in my head ...

Hi there! This is a really good song. I like it. The rhyme scheme is really good. It flowed well and I didn't see any place where that flow faltered. ...

Hi there! This is a really great poem, I enjoyed reading it! Your imagery is great and you put a lot of emotion into it. I like how you reapeated ...

Hi there! This is a great piece, I enjoyed reading it! You did a great job writing in the point of view of a non-human character. The wolf's thoughts still ...

Hi there! This is really good, I enjoyed reading it! I like how you basically made this one big monolouge. You really got into your character's head and brought out ...

Hi there! The path treaded by Jesus pained, but it’s time we walk it This is my favorite line. It's so true and I completely agree with it. Overall this ...

Hi there! Wow...this is an amazing story! You did a really great job potraying the emotions needed to make this kind of story work. You really got inside your character's ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this piece. It was written well and you kept me reading to the very end. The descriptions you wrote are amazing. You described the world ...

Hi there! "Because I'm a chick, and you let me pick the flick." I loved this answer! It's really funny. :) This is a great piece. To me it's basically ...

Hi there! I tried to write a story like this a couple years ago, but it never happened. All of these topics are tough and hard to write about, especially ...