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Re: Corrupt Ghosts
Thank you!
Apr 6, 2021 - Re: you hide bones under your bed, i hide them in my words. Apr 5, 2021
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Re: The Story Of An Introvert-1
Thanks a lot for reviewing...I was thinking that if its all that short, maybe I should merge it with the first chapter, keeping this as the opening.
Apr 5, 2021 -
Re: The Story Of An Introvert-1
Thanks for reviewing... Actually, I didn't mean anything to imply that extroverts are wizards...I was trying to say that Ruth isn't particularly fond of life as a human. Also, I ...
Apr 5, 2021 -
Re: That Old, Broken Fence - Prologue
Beautiful in a raw, make-you-wanna-cry sort of way. Love how it conveys the emotion without actually pinpointing the word sad or depressed. Also, great name for the therapist...really sounds like ...
Apr 5, 2021 -
Re: Project Oblivious - Ch 2
Hey! Nice opening, especially the first sentence, Josh seems adorable in a slightly awkward, self-depreciating kind of way. Really loved this line: “Really?” I say, raising one eyebrow. Well, tryi
Apr 5, 2021 -
Re: How Can I? (NaPo Poem #1)
Hi This is so beautiful...it's moving, deep, profound, touching...I could go on forever. Especially loved the last two lines of the second stanza Keep writing
Apr 5, 2021 -
Re: Corrupt Ghosts
I hadn't picked up on those errors. Thanks.
Apr 5, 2021 -
Re: Project Oblivious
Loved the Christopher Colombus ref...Does that have to do with Little Women??? I think there's an error in this line: "Oh thank god. I don't know them." Shouldn't it be ...
Apr 4, 2021