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Re: Losing yourself
Hey This poem is beautiful!! I really loved this line: When it gets to the point where you just don't care About anything It feels really relatable, like those times ...
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Re: It's Just About Growing Up
Hey! I really loved these lines: The world could turn upside down, but that grin on his face wouldn't. He dismissed the idea with a wave of his hand. "Nah, ...
Apr 5, 2021 -
Re: Chapter 4: Sea You Tonight
OMG!! Love this line: "Permission to laugh, sire?" Phineas asked sarcastically. Humor and sarcasm mixed to perfection! And the title, that was pure genius. This was also nice: "Though the ...
Apr 5, 2021