NinaRowan

Thank you so much! Yes, I will be adding more and I get what you mean, I will edit it a bit later and fix it up. Again, thank you ...

Thank you, I'll fix my mistakes now ^.^ I'll be sure to link you the next chapter if you wish :)

Thank you so much :) I'll correct the punctuation later on tonight.

Ooh thank you! Yeah I'll have another read through of it later. This helped a lot thanks so much :D

I have edited it a bit and hopefully it's better, If you would like to read it again than it's there but ya know You don't have to. Hopefully it ...

Oh okay, I'll keep that in mind.. I sort of rushed this at the time and there was sort of supposed to be a bit before it introducing the girlfriend ...

This is really good :) I read this before I went to bed, I got totally hooked ^.^ The literature is good, and I just love how this was written. ...

This is really good :) I read this before I went to bed, I got totally hooked ^.^ The literature is good, and I just love how this was written. ...