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Re: White Noise - Prologue
This is good, I really like this.. I can't really help much since I am new but I'd like to know what happens next :) I like your creativity and ...
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: Prologue: Of Love and Friendship
I like it! but you could possibly change am to was. "Still, I didn't have anyone who liked me for who I am." -> "Still, I didn't have anyone who ...
Sep 9, 2013 -
Re: Memoir
I love it! Reading this made me feel kind of sad, the emotional side of the story hit me like a rock. I love how this is written, the grammar ...
Sep 8, 2013 -
Re: The Assassin- Part Two
Ooh, this is so good! Love it, Love it, Love it! :D It has suspense, I like that. It's written out good, the writing is good, I love the layout! ...
Sep 7, 2013 -
Re: Goodbye.
This is great, I really got the feel of this poem. It sort of touched me, I got the emotional feeling you aimed for whilst writing this and I just ...
Sep 7, 2013