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Re: Going through Time-Chapter Two: We Meet a Hipster Dude
Nightshade22 again here to review. I liked how you keep adding more and more action. Your dialogue is good and can be realatable it isn't blocky when read aloud. Your ...
Jan 10, 2015 -
Re: Going through Time-Chapter One: The Beginning of Our Quest
Hi Nightshade21 here! I'm a huge PJO fan so when I saw this I exploded with excitement! So I liked how you started the story you jumped straight into the ...
Jan 10, 2015 -
Re: Daring the Fear
HI! nightshade here :) I really like how you list some things alot of kids are scared of like the creepy crawlies it was really unique. I also liked out ...
Jan 10, 2015