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Re: Assassin
(Reserving a review spot)
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Love I (Decay)
Thank you for the reviews everyone. I've done some editing that I hope filled in at least a few of the holes. If any of you see something that I ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: Help, which should I enter.
Hey retro. I only read the poetry, but "Oh how I hate the stars" and "Princess killer" were my favorites. Good luck with your entries!
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Parallel Lines
Thanks for the review. You're right, it was supposed to be "I never existed in them". I read it over four times before posting it and still didn't catch that ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Silver Lake
Thank you for the reviews. Now that I've looked back at it, I completely agree with the comments on the woman's story. It was an attempt to make her seem ...
Nov 12, 2010 -
Re: Waltz of the Rose
Thank you for the feedback. It means a lot to me. I intended this poem to be about the process of recovering from painful or traumatic events, with the initial ...
Nov 10, 2010
