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Re: la douleur exquise
Hmm... it definitely needs more. Update me pls when youve edited
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: The walls of the heart
Its a really good poem. The theme is clear. The feels are there.. and i like the idea of "walls". I like the rhythm youve used.. however.. I think the ...
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: Adieu
Sorry doesnt support my phones imoji :-P
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: Adieu
Hmm... i think its good. Its got a different tone... you may use it. Anddd.. dont stop doing something you are not good at. Instead, try to do it over ...
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: Adieu
Hmmm....the word "unexpected" ... could you edit again? Like... a word which means "something natural and expected to happen yet quite hard to accept"? ...thats how i would modify it%u263A
Feb 28, 2017