Nibroc

Awesome! Any slip-ups meter-wise are more than made up for in raw hilarity. Some of those rhymes crack me up uncontrollably. Love it. Just love it.

Stella , thanks for the review! It really helped me focus on a few things I need to work on for next time. However, I must beg your forgiveness if ...

Hey, thanks all of you for the comments/criticism! Rose , I'm glad you liked it. To clarify though, you said that the "burnt ice" thing is a bit of a ...