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Re: Vampire Super Models
Audreeyy! I've come to review your storryy!! Well. The best place to start is the beginning (unless you are telling an epic or you are watching star wars, that is) ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: Perlec
I as well agree with both of the replies before this one, but something else i noticed is a small part that could be slightly confusing unless you stopped to ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: The girl in the background
I really like it. It shows a lot of feeling, and you are doing well in expressing your thoughts in different ways. However, to me it seems a bit wordy. ...
May 19, 2009