NewHope

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Hey there, Lehmanf here with a short review. I hope it finds you well. Reading this poem I definitely have a quick ask. I think you should add punctuation. It ...

Hi Namedy, I hope you're well. Thank you for all your excellent reviews. I must say I get really involved with characters to the point where I was wiping away ...

Thank you for the valuable advice, Namedy. I wonder if there is a glitch because all the chapters you have so far told me to add an age rating to ...

Hi Namedy, I hope you're well and have enjoyed reading so far. I hope even though it is slow that flows well enough to keep the reader's attention. The start ...

My pleasure. If you would ever like to do so in a review you can use this code: [ quote ] [ / quote ]. Without the spaces of course. ...

My pleasure. Just happy to read your work and catch up with reviewing. They got close though. Lol. I%u2019m vaxxed anyway but that could have been a great plot twist. ...

Hello Andrew, Doing my best to take it with a pinch of salt so I really hope I'm not being rude. This chapter as you said is a vision. (Spoilers ...

I'll read it as soon as I can. Hopefully, you'll have the time soon.

Good luck!

I can't wait to see how you do so. My theory is Liam is sceptical after his sister is sacrificed.

I know what you mean but think about it this way. A prologue doesn't always have to have anything to do with the book. In a horror it could be ...

Hello again, Reaper, The effect was to keep it vague as the zoo is very important in the book. The way I set the chapter was not to tell the ...

Hey, Reaper, Sorry about the delay. Strict parents... but the new chapter is up.

This is a pretty good start to the story. If you want to reveal a lot of secrets along the way to shock the readers constantly this is probably the ...

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Hey there, MaybeAndrew, I hope all is well and you are having an excellent morning/afternoon/evening! Let's get this started. Arwen listened to the wind blow through the distant trees, trying ...