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Re: Untitled (Scene one)
I disagree with Ktg17, I think you have way too much description. If you're writing this scene to be performed, you have got WAY too many stage directions. Nothing annoys ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Persephone's Abduction
I was a little worried when I saw the title to this story, because I've read versions of this myth so many times! I was pleasantly surprised with your version. ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: A Bloody Un-Fairytale
I really like your writing style, but the story reminds me of a really bad one I read back in my Quizilla days.... I'd hate for you to waste your ...
Mar 2, 2008 -
Re: Lost and Discovered: Prologue part 1
I'm Confused.... the daughter of Hades and Zeus himself, about her hiding herself as the Rebel Goddess… Hades and Zeus had a daughter?? (How is that even possible) But when ...
Mar 1, 2008 -
Re: Reborn
The first thing you might want to do is go back a and fix your grammar. Spell check doesn't doesn't fix everything! (Learn the meanings of a comma and semi ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Venustas et Amor
First of all, that was an AMAZING story! My first piece of advice to you is to make it longer. Take the one chapter and turn it into three+, and ...
Feb 20, 2008