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Re: Hero for Hire: Chapter 4.2
Hello! I'm actually from Daejon, South Korea! It was sort of an added bonus when I read that portion of the older sister. I haven't exactly read all past chapters, ...
Wed Jul 25, 2018 5:11 am -
Re: Singles and Pairs (3) [discontinued]
I enjoy how you pay attention to detail. The dialogue is easy to follow, and the wording is great. This chapter does kind of seem like something out of a ...
Wed Jul 25, 2018 5:06 am -
Re: Singles and Pairs (3) [discontinued]
I enjoy how you pay attention to detail. The dialogue is easy to follow, and the wording is great. This chapter does kind of seem like something out of a ...
Wed Jul 25, 2018 5:05 am -
Re: Singles and Pairs (3) [discontinued]
I enjoy how you pay attention to detail. The dialogue is easy to follow, and the wording is great. This chapter does kind of seem like something out of a ...
Wed Jul 25, 2018 5:05 am -
Re: Eos, Chapter 3: The Underground
I can tell that you're a real savant of the arts. The flow of your dialogue is great. The setting descriptions are extremely detailed, although detail and flow aren't all ...
Wed Jul 25, 2018 5:00 am -
Re: Eos, Chapter 3: The Underground
I can tell that you're a real savant of the arts. The flow of your dialogue is great. The setting descriptions are extremely detailed, although detail and flow aren't all ...
Wed Jul 25, 2018 5:00 am