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Re: Darkness Within!
Also, as for your questions, S3, L6 seems like a typing error... I meant to write 'and' S5 L5, i am not sure was the system made it as underlined, ...
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Re: Darkness Within!
Hey! Firstly, thanks for taking time to read this and pointing out to the improvements. I am not sure how it is in general, but while writing poems, i at ...
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Re: Darkness Within!
First of all, I am glad you could relate to this piece! Yeah... This poem can definitely be refined and thankyou soo much for all the advices you have given ...
Nov 1, 2019 -
Re: Darkness Within!
Thanks! It can have many interpretations, but instead of unwillingness... Its more like more a struggle from one self in persuing one's dreams
Nov 1, 2019 -
Re: hell (alternative)
Hi, the content is pretty intriguing and forces me to ponder and relate how even us as individuals are struggling, waiting for answers to our own life, hoping for an ...
Oct 31, 2019
