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Or maybe it's just me.

Hm. Probably because we're from slightly different cultures.

Okay, it was only an opinion. Everybody is different, so it's fine if he says stereotypical teenager-ish things :) I suppose Dads do that from time to time...

But yeah, I should probably say something like "Isaac shifted his weight from leg to leg, but both of them were quite tired by now after all this standing..." or ...

Well, it's continuing chapter 4.

Thanks for the review! Also, Isaac was never in his bed. He was just sleepy.

DONT GIVE ME SPOILERS!!

The last thing I knew about captain Jack was that he was left in the future right after the dalek invasion in the last episode of season 1. I've seen ...

Don't worry, I'll definitely watch them! They're prime on Amazon video.

I've only seen Season 1 and season 11 (I know. weird, right?) But yeah, I liked season 11, though not as much as season 1.

Thanks for the review! I LOVE this. I am like, the biggest Doctor Who fan ever, so this made me smile I love dr. who too! It's probably my favorite ...

It's good advice.

Thanks for the review! Yes, this chapter needs serious revision, as it's probably my weakest chapter. Oh, and having her house burnt down and her parents maimed wasn't all that ...

Yeah, my strong suit is more stuff like plot and ideas, not descriptions. And yeah, I know generally how you're supposed to write good descriptions, what with describing about all ...

Thanks for the review! Also, if I tell you about why they let a 16 year-old work as an investigator, it would give spoilers.