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Wow! This was... disturbing. I'm definitely getting "A Wrinkle in Time" vibes. Here's my review: I like it so far. It's getting even more abstract, though you're learning a little ...

Wow. This chapter gave me a lot better idea of what this story is about. Shadows? Hiding? I'm liking this story already, even though I started in the middle. Here's ...

I liked this chapter! I haven't read any of the ones before it, but it was really good. It was also totally unexpected. I read the title thinking of butterflies ...

Interesting! I read the title thinking it might be a comedy, only to find that it was a sad story, the opposite of humor. It was very good. Here's my ...

Well! Interesting chapter. I see it took a romantic twist! Here's my review: So first of all, they fight the Turks and then Pan Casimir falls in love. Now, I ...

Hello! This was quite intriguing. I liked it quite a lot. Here's my review: Okay, first of all, I agree with this, except that you don't explain exactly what you ...

Interesting! I love reading some good horror now and then. And this was definitely some good horror! I absolutely enjoyed reading it. Here's my review: This story reminded me a ...

Well, this is the last chapter You've written so far, and, well, the story has been interesting all the way through as of yet, so that's good! Here's my review: ...

Wow. Okay, this was an interesting chapter... and Castle... WHY DID SHE DO THAT??? She certainly has a definite personality. here's my review: Okay. Hold on a minute. She STOLE ...

All righty, another chapter read. Moving to a new house is a very big thing. Here's my review: Okay, first of all, the dialogue was quite realistic. Like, more realistic ...

Well, this was an emotionally tense chapter, for sure. (Then again, they're all usually emotionally tense chapters...) I liked it. Here's my review: I definitely think you are good at ...

What??? I was definitely not expecting that! Oh wow. Oh dear... this chapter has such a huge twist. Here's my review: I liked this chapter quite a bit. The twist ...

Okay, another interesting chapter! Though the last chapter is still my favorite, I still like this chapter quite a lot. Here's my review: This had a very "woe is me" ...

Oh wow. Just wow. I did not expect that. Here's my review: This chapter took a very unexpected turn. I mean, what? First there was the kiss, which was apparently ...

Well! A dramatic ending there, I see. Nice chapter! Here's my review: This was a pretty interesting chapter. The descriptions of Castle were really good. I can definitely envision her, ...