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Re: Reminisces of Jack Frost the Third (Chapter 1)
Interesting! This was a big jump from the prologue. The whole scenario is quite fascinating, and I enjoyed reading it. Here's my review: It was interesting that it jumped from ...
Apr 9, 2020 -
Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 12 - Lungs
Well! This was an intriguing chapter I'm definitely hooked, wondering what's happening. Here's my review: I see that this chapter was from Aaron's point of view. The whole thing with ...
Apr 8, 2020 -
Re: Perfect
Very interesting! Now, I don't normally review poems, but since you asked me too, here it is. Here's my review: Wow. This was a really good poem. It was incredibly ...
Apr 7, 2020 -
Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 11 - Moon
This new chapter was pretty interesting, and the whole thing was kinda surreal like usual, which is great! Like I said before, it is hard to pull off. Here's my ...
Apr 6, 2020 -
Re: True Freedom
Well now! I'm glad to say that this hasn't happened to me. (I still have a conscience fortunately.) Here's my review: Well, first of all, who's chasing the person? I ...
Apr 5, 2020 -
Re: Asha and Tavia
Ouch. This was quite a sad short story, but I liked it, even if I wished it had a different ending. Here's my review: The dialogue was good, but I ...
Apr 4, 2020 -
Re: The Very Evil Sisterhood part 2
Interesting! This was extremely unique, and I definitely enjoyed reading it. Here's my review: I really liked this idea. Each paragraph describes a different foster home that they are in? ...
Apr 3, 2020 -
Re: Reminisces of Jack Frost the Third (Prologue)
Very fascinating! I am definitely pulled in. Here's my review: So, they're on a volcanic island it seems. The name "dragon eye" is really cool, I like it! Anyway, besides ...
Apr 2, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 3
All right! I haven't read the previous chapters, but I liked this one for sure! Here's my review: This could be interesting. The genre is fantasy, but the setting is ...
Apr 2, 2020 -
Re: Heroes of Valtome, Chapter 2
All right! This is an interesting chapter, though I haven't read the first one. Here's my review: From what I can tell, Rhysive is some kind of animal or humanoid ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: Alchemy for Newcomers
Interesting! It's like an instruction manual, except that it is a series of letters. I forget what those kinds of stories are called... I remember it has a name, though. ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: Outside the City Walls
I'm stunned. This was really good. (Though, if you read my other reviews I'm not that hard to please, lol) Here's my review: Okay, first of all, this is so ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 10 - Stars
Fireworks are always fun. This was another interesting chapter! Here's my review: Okay first of all, I liked this chapter a lot, but I feel like you spent to much ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 9 - Reek
Wow! This chapter suddenly had a bunch of action! I liked it. Here's my review: They had amnesia? Well, that's never good. It makes an interesting story though! Okay, so ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 8 - Twine
...And the characters come together. Here's my review: I was not expecting the zombie guy to join this sudden group! Anyway, this was interesting, again. I'll probably keep saying that, ...
Mar 31, 2020
