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Kylan - I have been rethinking some things about this piece. I had two major ideas - Firstly, when I mentioned conflict/head/heart: I can see the piece is subtle. That's ...

Righto. It's good to see how thorough you were in planning this, Kylan. The UFO served to actualize Ignacio's need for distraction . Something that could counter-act the redundancy of ...

(co-written with Albert Einstein) Man, you are old .

Decided to just put it there. No attachment :D.

io I'm not well-versed in mythology, so I looked this up after reading it for the first time. And I was delighted to discover how all the details fitted in. ...

Thanks everyone! Shepherd - I know what you mean about pacing. Since the first is so long, one tends to glaze over the words to devour them faster, meaning they ...

So, I keep coming back to this. This story is irresistible - it has this magnetic intellectual pull for me. This time, I had a read of Richard Siken's 'You ...

Why can't I double 'Like' this? 'Types of kiss, according to the encyclopaedia' - delicious, just as I would have expected from the title. Granted, after repeat mentions of cows ...

Oh...God. I've got relatively little constructive to say to this poem. In fact, I'm having some trouble with coherency right now, thanks to just having read it. This one, I ...

A lot of intellectual stimulation here. And a clear mention of string theory at the end, which delights me. Peppered with example upon example taken from the scientific world, I ...

Thanks Kylan, Snoink. :D My turn to say why this is going to be tossed - it's all description and no story, not until the very end. That's, well, boring. ...

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Wonderful! So good to see you've given this a makeover. :D And I know exactly what you mean about intending it to be a love poem - so many poems ...

Thanks guys! Jas - I find it interesting that the stanza I most enjoyed writing was the one you thought was stuffed full of little ideas. It's true; it was ...

Thank you to Flower, Lily, Macbeth, and Demeter for your comments! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem...I don't really want to give the mystery away, as such, but indeed there ...