Navita

This. Is. Fantastic. I LOVE reading about science when it's under the mask of poetry - it adds such a strange layer to it all! And you have pulled it ...

Main comment here is that I LOVED the image of him chasing lightning - it's actually quite new and fresh, so that's why I enjoyed it. However, the rest of ...

Well, I feel like I'm just repeating everyone else when I say this, but you KNOW it was incredibly funny. I am not a fan of reviewing lyrics, usually, because ...

Line after line of question makes each question lose its impact. I agree with Jagged, and I further think that you should take maybe two or three of those questions, ...

Well...this was certainly another bit of light humour I've read this morning. I thought 'megaman, superman, gigaman' was a cool transition - and I'd love to see you do something ...

I'm a big fan of Harry Potter - or was, a few years back - so I have to say, this is one of the funniest things I've read in ...

Hi Jagged! I'm Navita, and, I have to admit, it's been a while since I reviewed short stories, so I'm a little rusty...but I'm prepared to dive head-first in this ...

I don't quite understand what you mean by an 'adjectives assessment' - hey, note that I'm from NZ, and haven't got anything of the sort here. If it means what ...

Emma - That was a wonderful opening line: 'How did you do that?' My question to you exactly :). I was hooked, wanting to know more, on the edge of ...

Wow, well, I feel like TheNewHero has really done all the work for me. He talked about letting the EMOTION of the work get out - which is REALLY hard, ...

Good flow, especially in the beginning. I'm not sure you're aware, but your poem lines follow a pattern of syllables like this: 2, 4, 8, 6, 8, 1, 7, 1, ...

First up, 'high up in the air' is not the most original line to begin with. perdido said end with a bang, and I will add to that: begin with ...

For me...the 'don't soak me in honey, kill me in poison' part was the most vivid. I think you know that this poem is very raw, and I know that ...

Oh, oh, oh ! This is very talented, and - don't ask me why - this makes me feel like it is a globe-poem (even I have no idea what ...

Other people have said this doesn't read like poetry. I beg to differ - it does: the tone of your voice, your word choice, and line strucutre - short, sharp ...