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I agree with Skins, here. I'm not an expert at scripts, so I couldn't even begin to comment on the finer parts of this, but from the outset, it was ...

Gosh - that was so amazingly long! But of course, you are telling a story, and so you are perfectly entitled to make it that long. :D Usually, I'm not ...

I liked this. *clicks like button* I think it's interesting what happens when people we know, or kind of know, or know really well, die or disappear or do something ...

Wow. I really shouldn't be reviewing right now - but I couldn't help it; this was intense, and gripping. And, most importantly, it was fast-paced and mysterious. I liked the ...

That. Was. An. Immediate. WIN - yeah!!! :P I loved it - it was arresting, and different - oh, and great title, by the way (I thought I might have ...

Hey Skins - I wasn't really sure how much time I'd have for a review, and I was almost about to tell you it might not be possible soon...but I ...

In a weird way...I understand the character more here and I'm less attached to the story/plot itself. Kind of like...I like that you are expanding on who the character is, ...

For something so short, I didn't really think it needed that much background as you gave us - unless the whole thing is part of the novel, of course, in ...

Cool avvie! I LOVE rabbits - so cute! Anyway...back to the point - I thought the title was awesome. The long and complicated nature is kind of what made it ...

I agree with Jas - more imagery would be AWESOME!!! And I LOVED the title - I am a big fan of quirky titles - so well done :D. I ...

Not that I judge a poem by its title, but I think a better title is definitely in order. I'd recommend having a look in 'All Community Forums' for 'Tips ...

Again, you really have a thing for beginnings. I liked that opening line - it was *BANG* for me, a perfect one-liner. :P Since this is just to help me ...

So...I know I said I'd only review the latest chapter, but I needed to get my thoughts in order first, so I thought I'd write some brief notes here, on ...

To be totally honest, Jagged, I did not enjoy this. Main reason was because it read like a long character description, a 'story-of-her-life' kind of piece as opposed to a ...

Just wanted to say that the first thing that jumped out at me was the formatting of the poem - you know how you begin the poem with 'slender figure'? ...